Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Cross Country - Effective Paragraph

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i burst like a simple flame my brain was pounding like a drum my fists were shaking.I was frustrated my leg was burning like a hot tamale i could feel my heart pounding like it was gonna pop out like popcorn. I was a bull who was ready to charge and felt angry and ready to rumble through the wild crowd i could hear the jungle of monkeys and lions cheering and roaring saying you can do it i wanted to go home but once i got to the starting line, i couldn’t because once Mr Burt slammed the bricks together it was game on. I could not wait until i crossed the finish line it was a relief i tried my best to do my best at the cross country race.

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