Tuesday, 8 September 2015


WALT: write an introduction that orientates and hooks in the reader.
Guess what! Did you know what room 8 made well we made home made butter it was so delicious with a slice of bread. We made the butter with miss garden it was so much fun you should make it some time it is really easy but before we started we had to get into 4 groups so we can have some butter and some bread.


  1. Try not to give away the whole story in the introduction. You need to make the reader want to read on to find out more.
    I like that you are trying to hook in your reader with a question.