Friday, 26 February 2016

My Narrative Writing

  One day in Auckland NZ there were two girls named Emily and Tiare that wanted to go to the Extreme theme park.

So they did but they had noticed how much it was going to coast so the figured out a plane and they got there money that they needed. This was there first time going to a theme park they could not wait to get there because they were just so excited. So when they got there the first thing the did was go on the roller-coaster they felt really scared when they went on it.

When we went around the loop de loop we got stuck for about 1 hour and then threw out that whole hour we were almost gonna collapse but finally we didn't one of the workers got the roller-coaster started so the got down and they said I'm never going on that ride ever again in my life.


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