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Showing posts with label writing 2015. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing 2015. Show all posts

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Year 6 Camp Bentzon

Introduction
Wow you will never guess where the year sixes went to. Well on Tuesday the 17th of November we went to kawau island. When I first saw the island I knew I was going to have an awesome time.

P1
After that we had to talk with Peter and Erin for some instructions then after that we had to go for a really long hike it was like we weren’t aloud to stop. We had to go to this beach we stayed there for about an hour then we went back and had a little bit of free time to do our cabins and the cabin I was in was the letter W then we had dinner then went to bed.

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When we first woke up we had to go for this steep as run which is called killer hill. I was so tired I felt like I was going to faint But did not because I called smell the delicious food So I made it.Then after that we had breakfast for breakfast we had baked beans and spaghetti on toast That was hot food for cold food we had peaches weetbix,cornflakes and rice bubbles. After breakfast we were going to start our activities.

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When we went to our first activity it was called find the clues what you had to do was find the letters then when you find all of the letters you have to spell words out of them and we just finished when it was morning tea time for morning tea we had three biscuits and a piece of fruit.

P4
When we finished having tea we had our next activity it was kayaking it was so fun but it was funny because Adriel kept falling in the water and billy too and the we played kayak tiggy to play you had to tag the back of their kayak after that we went to the pontoon and had to hang on to each others kayak and try to switch kayaks.


P5
My favorite part was booming and swimming but my most favorite part was the concert because we got to do our dance and we came 2nd and I won two chocolates and a lollipop it was awesome and amazing.         

Wednesday, 4 November 2015

The silly and revolting weetbix and cream game

Introduction
Wow have you ever played the creamy weetbix game well early this morning the year fives and sixes played the creamy weetbix game but actually you can make up your own name for this game. When we started to eat it was so disgusting I didn’t want to eat it but I had to so I did. ‘’Go’’ said my partner you can do this so I never gave up.  


How to play
Here are some tips about playing the game you need four boys and four girls to start the game of you can do 3 or more rounds and if you like you could play the game with pieces of fruit or other kinds of food and last but not least you need plates so about eight of plain colored plates that’s and I almost forgot you need whip cream and weetbix.


My funniest part
For me my funniest part was when my partner was shoving the creamy weetbix in my mouth. It was even mixed with an apple it was revolting but i had lot’s and lot’s of fun with all of my classmates it was so awesome.     

What the creamy weetbix taste like
The creamy weetbix tasted like spue it was revolting and yuck because once I eat the creamy weetbix with an apple I felt so sick I just wanted to go home but know I didn’t give up so I was trying my hardest to get it down my mouth but I couldn’t so I spat it out in the rubbish bin.


conclusion how you felt
I felt sick like I was going to spue but I didn’t I just keep going to try my best. When you mix something that doesn’t go together that means it’s just really really gross it’s like mixing chips with tomato sauce it’s disgusting that’s why you never mix yummy food with revolting food


Other interesting facts
If you could you can even make up your own gross and yummy game.Have a try and this is only if you want to you can even write about how you felt and what it was like. But do not try the creamy weetbix.

Friday, 16 October 2015

Holiday Highlight writing

Wow you will never guess what I did in the holidays. On friday after the last day of school me and my family went to tenpin bowling it was so cool we played a lot of games at the academy. We even got to play the actual game of bowling that was the coolest day ever and it was even my first time in a long time to play a game of bowling it was awesome because BK was right next to tenpin bowling that was the start of my holiday.    

Then On Saturday It was my cousin's birthday. Her theme was frozen and the birthday girl was dressed up as elsa her birthday was so awesome because there was a candy bar that was filled with delicious lollies and last but not less there was a dessert bar with a chocolate fountain. After a few minutes we had to eat the food was so great I couldn't stop eating after we eat we played some games they were pass the passles but the best game was that you had to make your own olaf out of a person and when I got my goody bag I filled my bag up with lollies. After that we all settled down and watched descendants the movie night was so amazing then we all had a good night sleep.

The next day was Sunday so I woke up and I started to get a chill so I had a warm hot shower to get ready to go to the beach. My aunt Kelly and her kids came over we had lunch and it was fish and chips. After that we had to rest our stomachs to get ready to play some games like relays and the group that had built the best castles would win a whole block of chocolate and the losers just win lollies. That Sunday was cool I wish I could do that again.

After we had something to eat we went back to my cousins house when we got there we played a game of 123 you're in with me all of her friends friends came over and played a game with us that was the best birthday party my cousin has ever had.
The last thing we did between my holiday was going to the pools the G.I pools though it was kind of boring going to the G.I because we always have to come to the G.I pools nearly every day but my best was enjoying the slippery slide but they would only do it in the holidays some time they don’t after a few minutes we had to have lunch then settle our stomachs then jump back in the pool. That was the last thing I did in my holiday


In the holidays hope I'm going to do a lot more things like going out and having lot’s of fun with my friends and family and I wish to do a lot of fun things to.
 

         



Tuesday, 8 September 2015

Butter,Butter,Butter

WALT: write an introduction that orientates and hooks in the reader.
Guess what! Did you know what room 8 made well we made home made butter it was so delicious with a slice of bread. We made the butter with miss garden it was so much fun you should make it some time it is really easy but before we started we had to get into 4 groups so we can have some butter and some bread.



Monday, 31 August 2015

Hooking in

WALT: introductions that orientate and hook in my audience

First try
Guess what we're doing for trade and enterprise?The group that I’m in is kitchen it is really fun because we get to make a lot of yummy things my group and I are making chocolate mousse when we finish making the chocolate mousse we get ready to sell them at the trade fair. Trade and Enterprise is about selling thing and making stuff for people to buy.   

With a ?
Buy one get for free.


with a !
Are you wondering what My group is selling? We are selling chocolate mousse yummy if you want to order come to my work shop to order how many you want. My mousse will only be 1PT see  you there and don’t miss out on a thing!



with facts
1 pt is worth 1 dollar, 20 pieces is worth 20 cents,they are like real money but they're not. Spend them or you could save it up in your bank. There is six groups they are called Home ware,Jewellery and accessory,Kitchen,Musical instruments,Custom Stationery and Toys.














Thursday, 20 August 2015

Grass to Glass part 2

Walt: Add detail to the beginning of sentences.

As soon as the milk comes out out of the cow is gets cooled. Then when the farmer comes and picks up the milk it goes to the dairy milk factory. When he finishes he measures how much the milk was, so then he pays the farmer.


So that we can make different types of milk. The cream and milk are separated and the milk you can make are blue milk and green milk there is hardly any milk in the green bottle and there is heaps in the blue bottle. That’s the kind of milk you can make.


As the milk is boiling in the machine .Bacteria is killed by pasteurisation the milk. That’s what keeps the milk nice and healthy and by boiling the milk it kills the germs that are in the machine. 072 degrees Celsius which can burn you. So we don’t put the germ in the milk the farmers put on hair caps and white gumboots and plastic bags to go over you gumboots.

Finally the milk goes into bottles for you guy to buy and drink.
Now you know where you glass of milk comes from.





Monday, 3 August 2015

Living on a farm

Growing up on a farm the country may be fun but it can also be hard work.
We have been looking at dairy farming in New Zealand and people use machines and the machines produce milk.


                                                               Riding a Horse
Riding a horse would be amazing but I have never been on a horse before I’ve been looking at people riding them and It just looks so fun If I was Riding on a horse then that would be my first and if I had one wish that I could ride any animal that would be a horse.


                                           Feeding the calves


If I was living on a farm it would be fun to feed and take care of the calves if I feed them I wouldn't get the milk off their mum because she has to be milked that’s why they drink  milk powder for the calves to drink that’s why I would live on a farm.   
                               


Why wasn’t I born in the country? After school there would be so many things to do like feeding calves, chickens and pigs, and riding bikes and horses. I think country kids are very lucky!

Hi and we have been learning about dairy farms I wish I could live on a farm because it just looks so much fun please visit my blog and leave a comment thank you




                                   







Wednesday, 29 July 2015

My Holiday Highlight

Wow you will never guess what I did in the holidays. On tuesday me and my family went to Matariki at Matariki we saw a lot of lovely lights they were amazing and we watched the cook island dance After we saw the cook island group we had pizza the pizza was YUMMY! the pizza that I had was ham and cheese. Then we went to my house and eat the pizza after having pizza for dessert we had custard caramel slices and sprinkles with apple pie DElICIOUS! then we all went to bed.


The next day we all woke up had breakfast. For breakfast we had scrambled eggs on toast steak and mince that's what my aunts and uncles had me and my brother had pancakes we had a yummy breakfast.After that we cleaned our house then went to the pools fun! I was doing a lot of booms in the pool. For lunch we had chicken and chips for lunch from Elstree there chicken is really nice.


On sunday it was my cousins 8th birthday it was fun because for his birthday we went to Rainbow’s end it was cool but I was scared because of the stratis fair it would of swang you upside down that was my most scary ride and the fair for his cake was a red motor bike and the birthday boy's name was Dinero his is my most favorite boy cousin his birthday was awesome and I’m glad he had an amazing time at rainbow’s end.


On his birthday we had yummy goody bags in our goody bags we had lollies chocolates and a packet of chips DELICIOUS I think that was my 2nd favorite birthday i've ever been to and we had hangi for his birthday.

After we had something to eat we went back to my cousins house when we got there we played a game of 123 you're in with me all of his friends came over we had a lot of fun once we played the game we all got tied so we went to bed and had a good night sleep.


That was the greatest holiday i’ve ever been to my holiday was so amazing and I can’t wait until the next holiday.






  

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

Thursday, 18 June 2015

My basketball writing

“Hey there” have you ever played basketball at your school before? Well at my school my coach Yaran teaches us “Skills and” how to play basketball.

First you need to warm up,we played octoboss it was lots of fun if you get tagged then you turn into seaweed then
you have to try and get more people to be in with you but your goal is to get them all out
The next lesson  was how to do a chest pass. When you do a chest pass you need to have you hands on your chest then you throw the ball to your partner you have to try get 60 passes in thirty seconds. If you get 60 passes in thirty seconds then you have to sit up and fold your arms so you can get points for you and your partner.

In basketball what I am looking forward to next time if
that we have more lessons to learn and that we can have a lot more fun playing games and the thing I liked about basketball was when we all played golden child.


There were two teams one team was running and the other team was shooting the ball in the hoop. The team that is running have to try and make it around the hall before the other team gets the ball in the hoop when te ball gets in the hoop we all yell out “STOP!”








Wednesday, 10 June 2015

Winter is here


Wow can you believe that winters here? This morning I got out of bed once I went in the bathroom I was frozen like a block of ice. My feet were cold and it was like I stepped in a icy puddle. When I went outside it was really foggy. As I was walking to school my hands started to shake so then I went back home to get my Gloves.

Hi this is my writing that I have done if you like it can you please leave a comment.

Thursday, 4 June 2015

My blindfold game writing

Have you ever played blindfold games before? We played blindfold games and it was fun. The game involved rice, safety pins,blindfolds and a bowl. There were 20 safety pins in the bowl of rice lucky they weren't pins you hang on the wall because you would have poked yourself and that would hurt. I was nervous. Some people have never played blindfold games before so if you have not played blindfold games here's how you play them.

The way to play this game is that you need to get in a semicircle then Miss Lavakula needs to set one minute on the timer.  all of the kids in room 8 had turns because miss L
avakula called out six names to start of then you need to get 6 bowl of rice and 20 safety pins and six blindfold too then you can start the game.

first you had to start off with 6 kids and the first 6 to start were Andrew, Jonathan, Machelle, Tavake, and Montel they were the first ones to get some safety pins out of the bowl after they had finished Miss Lavakula had to get there score of  pins to see who had got the most so one of them could get a prize from Miss Lavakula.

These are all of the safety pins that they got. Andrew got 14 pins, Jonathan got zero, Michelle got two, Tavake got one and Montel got one too everyone in room 8 were very excited to play the blindfold game they were excited because they just couldn't wait for their turn that why they were excited and happy.   


I felt happy excited, the reason why I was excited was that every body had a good and great time what I’m looking forward to next time is  fun games and the pins were hard to find because they just felt like rice that’s why I was just pulling all of the rice out of the bowl that’s how I got 14 safety pins out of the bowl.



Friday, 15 May 2015

Chocolate game writing

Wow, have you ever played the chocolate game? Well Room 8  played this funny game, it involved dress ups, dice and of course chocolate.


It was amazing. I’m going to give you some advice so you know how to play it.  Let’s get started. You have got to have
1 clothing for your dress ups and a plate,knife and fork and five accessories.Then you had to put on 5 accessories and one piece of clothing. If you roll a six then you have to dress up and then start cutting the chocolate but you only get one piece of chocolate if you had a piece then you have to sit back down in the circle but if you roll a 2,3,4 or 5 then you’ve got to sit back in your place.


There were only two people that eat the chocolate it was Me and Montel it was fantastic. Once I had put chocolate in my mouth it started to melt, it tasted delicious and YUMMY!.


My favourite part was we were all laughing and giggling around When Martin put on the round coconut cup, it was funny everyone had a great time playing the chocolate game.   





Wednesday, 6 May 2015

The earthquake in Nepal

Do any of you’s watch the news?Well on channel three in Nepal there was a 7.8 earthquake.As the ground started to crack there was dirt and dust coming out of the ground and that’s when everyone went in the middle of the street so the buildings wouldn't fall on them.



Then the people were scared and afraid of the earthquake and because most of their families were buried but still alive they were buried under the dirt and dust and that’s when some of their families died because they suffocated under the dirt and dust. There were demolished buildings,crashed cars. The houses that the people were living in got damaged that’s why they had to sleep on the streets and people were displace.

Wednesday, 29 April 2015

My weekend writing

WALT: My weekend writing

Guess what i did in the weekend?On Saturday morning me my brother,dad and mum went to McDonalds for breakfast it was YUMMY! for breakfast I had hot cakes with maple syrup and a pineapple smoothie.After we had breakfast we stayed at my nan's house for a little bit a few minutes later my dad gave me and my brother ten dollars each we spent it on lollies and decorations for our room me and my family had a amazing day out.

The next day my Aunt and uncle came over to ask us if we wanted to go to the skate park and my dad said yes so we grabbed our scooters and went to the skate park.When we got there we had a little snack before we went for a skate but the favourite part of the day was when me and all of my cousins came over and we had a lot of fun and that was my long weekend.

Wednesday, 22 April 2015

My Holiday Highlight writing

Have you ever been to bounce and beyond? It was awesome because there were a lot of bouncy castles, there was this one bouncy castle and it was my favourite it was a slide it was long and high when I went down I got butterflies and I screamed but to go faster you had to where theses sheets that’s how you make it go faster.After we finished going there we had lunch for lunch we had burger king YUM!


A few minutes later we went to tenpin bowling but just to play games my favourite game there was this alien game you had to punch the aliens so you could get tickets to win a prize from the prize box.If you play Deal or No Deal you would get a lot of tickets like two hundred tickets.After that we played laser trike before we started we had to go over the instructions then that’s when we started I got 8 people out and then I came 3rd. Then. we played more games and I got 705 tickets and for my prize I got a whistle a ring and a huge box of cards.


For dinner we went to Dunkirk park to go watch the rugby game. and to have dinner for dinner we had chicken salad sandwiches and mash potatoes then me and my brother saw our aunts and they gave us Easter eggs and my mum and dad got one too they had this big train made out of chocolate.Me, my brother had a share pack and it was filled with lollies and three Easter eggs that was my most favourite day.

The next time this happens I would look foreword to do more fun things just like this but if I had one wish that would be going to Australia because there are a lot of fun places there like wet and wild and many more fun places That is my one wish. and I enjoyed my Holiday and I could not wait until school had started. On sunday we had to go down to my nanas house to have a family dinner so all of my cousins came and my Uncles and Aunts came,that is the end of my Holiday
I hope the rest of you guys had a great Holiday.

Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Hokulea and Hikianalia writing

Wow you will never guess where pt England went and a few other schools we saw the two waka they were beautiful My favourite part was when we sang songs to welcome the people that were on the waka and the songs we sang where e oh He honore and Nga waka.When it had finished all of the schools had to go down to shake the Hikianalia peoples hand then all of the schools left.Once all of the schools went we went back to school. But before we had morning tea we had to go to the hall to have a little chat.So today was a great time for pt england school and a few other schools and all of the schools had fun seeing the wake the people.There were about 2000 student a pt England beach it was awesome and the grass felt so wet we had to sit on our hats and jumpers the Hokule’a sang a song to us to they sounded beautiful I wanted to hear them sing again and the only schools I saw where tamaki college st patricks ropotaka and pamure brigh and those where the only schools I saw every body had a good time and the ceremony was at point England reserve.



Thursday, 19 February 2015

My presentation about Disappearing frogs

Hi and this is my presentation about Disappearing frogs Hope you like and if you do please leave a comment thank you

Wednesday, 11 February 2015

summer holiday

During the school holidays we went to swimarama pools because it was beaming hot it felt like I was going to blow.So then we went for a swim then I was going to jump off the diving board it was amazing. And I went on the slide to it was awesome we had lunch at the pools but what we had for lunch was a BBQ but we only went there for my brothers first birthday and that was the coolest day ever.


The next day it was Friday at 8:00 we had gone to the movie in the park the movie that we had watched was the box trolls we had candy floss my one was humongous it was a large one.And the movie was awesome it was awesome because.



two days later we went to rainbow’s end my mum and dad they wanted to go on the new ride the strati x fair it looked freaky because it would flip you over and it was like a swing it would swing you around. Then after that we went on the log flom then then the fair fall I was getting the butterfly it looked scary but it was amazing and awesome to.


On Friday it was waitangi day it was my nan's birthday it was fun because we went to valentines there were a lot of fun because we had a bbq it was yummy and then after that we had a chocolate mud cake for her birthday to and it had cherries on top but it was awesome and I had a good time.