Considering other peoples view point

WALT: Consider someone else’s viewpoint

This week we are learning to take part in other peoples viewpoint and also considering there side of the six statements read all of my statements about why I agree and disagree there are six statements to read from see which ones your favorite Here's a video down below this is one that should really come to mind. Considering other peoples view point - VIDEO

The Cinderella twist

One early morning Cinderella’s dad had come into her room and told her something very surprising he had told cinderella he had got his dream job further off in the city. Cinderella was very unhappy to see her father go but she knew his job was his dream so she had pondered and had let her father go.

Cinderella reached for coincidence and set off for a few days to find her true love. First she had to blurt her step mother before she took off but she had got locked up in the basement. She yelled “Let me out let me out” so her fairy godmother had heard Cinderella was in trouble so she came to help cinderella get ready for this ball.

Cinderella had traveled to the castle and found her true love dancing alone. When the prince had set eye on Cinderella he was amazed to see someone so beautiful she asked for this one dance and she said “yes you may have this dance”They had danced for quite a while but as soon as that clock strikes twelve Cinderella knew what would happened if it had hit twelve. She told her prince she had to go but he held her but she managed to get away as he ran after her it was to late she had already left but she left a shiny blue glass slipper on the second step of the castle.

The Prince pushed orders and continued to look for this girl in a discreetly way of manner he went around town searching for this one girl but she was nowhere to been seen only until she asked who he was looking for. The prince had looked disgusted by how she looked and didn't wanna take observe on what she looked like so he said who are you,you look very hideous person to be seen “oh no” she said “my prince doesn't love me for who I am” she asked to wish for anything and she wished for a decent and generous man so she married a baker and Cinderella lived a merry life.

My story about Cinderella is kind of different towards the real story behind the movie it's like a twist so I hope you have enjoyed and enjoy my writing about Cinderella

Present and Reflect

Last week Room 1 literacy were focusing on speeches and I presented my speech about why education should be free in front of the whole class. Click this video to hear my speech.





This is my reflection on what I need to work on and what I need to focuses on while I'm reading my speech out to the class. click here and see.

Simple, compound complex Sentences

WALT - Identify and use simple, compound and complex sentences.

Hi and this is my Simple, compound and complex Sentences i had to make my own paragraph and put it into place.Please leave a nice and friendly comment down below and be alerted for more post.

Reading different texts

WALT - Summarise information in a text


Hi and this is my completed reading for today this is all about learning evidence this is about three text and they are what a disaster,world's water is running out and the last one is making note's about oil the most important part was to answer with full sentences but it was hard to figure some of the questions out and there were some questions that were hard and not hard but it's was fun at the same time trying to work out the answers and to read the texts.

How to bake chocolate chip cookies

How to make chocolate chip cookies

Have you ever had chocolate chip cookies before? I have and I’m going to show you how to make them. The first step is to preheat your oven to 350 degrees Fahrenheit and on bake then you want to get all of your ingredients and start mixing them altogether.

So what you're gonna need is 1 large bowl or any bowl, 1 cup of softened butter,1 cup of white sugar,1 cup of brown sugar,2 eggs,2 teaspoons of vanilla extract,3 cups of all-purpose flour,1 teaspoon of baking soda,2 teaspoons of hot water,½ teaspoons of salt and ½ cups of chocolate chips but if you like you could add  anything peanuts, walnuts,M&M’s anything you would prefer to have in your cookie.

After you have finished putting all of your ingredients into your bowl you want to mix your cookie mixture just until everything has combined. If you're like me I love a chewy cookie and to make a chewy cookie you're gonna have to use the real mixer to mix it well until combined and this may sound crazy but the homemade cookies you make at home are ten times better than the box cookies because they're chewy yummy and they got a slight crunch from the edges.

Then you want to cook them for about 20 minutes in the preheated oven and then you will know there done when you see the nice crispy brown around the edges. Put them on a platter and let them cool completely and then share them out to your family and friends.

Tip: If you bake half and you put the remaining half in the freezer you could have homemade cookies in 15 minutes.

Explanation writing

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One special thing about my community are mine and my family’s marae. I live in Auckland New Zealand and my marae is very far from where I live. My marae is all the way in Taheke next to Waima and Kaikohe.

It takes about four and a half hours to get to my marae. what’s special about my marae is that my an sister that have passed that was there marae and Taheke marae is still there because that’s where they were brought up. If you didn’t know there are always cemeteries next to your marae that’s where my great grandparents and an sister that have passed that’s where they had got barred and that is very special to me.

If you have two marae that you think are really special to you and your family community that’s great because I have two marae, the other marae is Hiona marae that's all the way in Hamilton. This marae is special to me because that’s my papa’s mum and dad's marae and there is a cemetery just down the road from Hiona marae and that’s where they had been barred. Hiona marae is another special marae in our family community.

Taheke and Hiona are very special towards our family community and we always put koha towards both maraes Taheke and Hiona but most important the reason why Taheke and Hiona are really special to me is because Taheke marae is my Nan's marae and Hiona marae is my papa's marae and they are both very much alive.

These both marae Hiona and taheke are the most special towards our community and they are really common and they will always be our most important marae in our family community.

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One special thing about my community are mine and my family’s marae. i live in Auckland New zealand and my marae Is very far from where live. The marae is all the way in Taheke next to waima and kaikohe.

It takes about four and a half hours to get to my marae.What’s special about my marae Is that my great grandparents that have now passed on Taheke is where they were brought up. If you didn’t know there are always cemeteries next to your marae that’s where my great grandparents had been bared and that is one thing that is very special to me.

I have two marae, the other marae is hiona marae hiona is all the way in Hamilton. This marae is special to me because Hiona marae is my papa’s marae and where he was brought from.

Taheke and hiona are very special towards our family Community and we always put koha towards both maraes. Taheke and hiona are most important towards our family the reason why Taheke and hiona are really special to me is because Taheke marae is my Nana’s marae and hiona marae is my papa's marae and they are both very much alive.

These both marae hiona and taheke are the most special towards our community and they are really common and they will always be our most important marae in our family community.

Simple and compound sentences

WALT - Identify & write simple and compound sentences

Why people need to drink water

WALT - Plan for a piece of explanation writing.

Why people need to drink water

Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	Why People Need to Drink Water
Introduction	Did you know that water is a healing power to the world? It saves you from cancer and many more conditions we tend to get. Here are some interesting facts we have been researching about.
Information 1st element	Firstly Water can help us survive  - how? You need water to survive because we don’t want to die of thirst it’s really important to drink to survive.
Information 2nd element	did you know we need to drink 8 cups of water each day to keep hydrated? We need to keep hydrated all the time because it can slow us down. Drinking enough water each day helps you keep healthy and the adults have to drink sixteen cups of water each as well.
Information 3rd element	Water can make you stronger? How? water helps maintain ours muscles and many more parts of our body. Water helps us to recover, run and to do active things towards our health.
Conclusion	Our main point of view is to always stay healthy and hydrated no matter what! Make sure to drink at least eight cups of water a day.

Highlight's of this term

Hi and this is my presentation about some of my highlight's for this term so i hope you enjoy and comment down below witch won you liked the most thank you.

Avachara writing/planing

Name: tana teo

M/F: Male

Skin colour: creamy colour

Hair colour: brown

Character traits: kind, brainy, and always happy

Where he lives: Auckland

Where he’s from: Kaikohe

What’s special about him is that he: is very brainy but no one knows because they thinks he dumb

What cultra he is: full maori   

What he loves: he loves to wear puffy jackets and visors and he love’s hanging out with his friends

What school he goes to: he goes northland college in kaikohe

Where he stays: he stays with his grandparents because his mum is gone to paris for her job interview

Age: 17 year of age

Sport’s: tag

Location: 21 jump street in kaikohe

Wish: prefect

On Sunday the 1st of June Tana teo had to move to his grandparents house again the street was 21 jump street road he had to stay at his grandparents house for 1 month   because his mum had a job interview in pairs as a chef.

Tana teo is full Maori he loves to play tag his wish is to become a prefect at North land college he’s 17 years of age he’s kind,brainy and always happy he live in Auckland but now stays in kaikohe.

Tana started his new school at North land college in kaikohe the next day, he could remember some of his old friends and Tana even noticed how tall they had gotten the last time he had seen them he had two friends Jacob and Benny they weren't brainy as Tana was he was like like smartest kid in school and nobody knew and that’s what made him very special.

As week one past on Tana Teo became one of the school prefects of North land college if you're a student of north land college and you wanted to be a prefect of the school you don’t have to write a letter in depends on how many votes you get. Tana Teo got the most votes he wasn't the only one there were three girls and two boy including himself so that’s six prefects all up once Tana Teo heard his name get called out his name he was excited and happy that he had become a prefect. It was his 1 wish and dream to become a prefect so he knew how to edit movies make movies and practice acting out for the koriro of the school.

After he had finished editing and practiced his act for Friday he wanted to join tag it was his sport everyone didn’t know Tana could play tag but he bliss all of them and got 3 tries for his team he was amazing his team was called #hashtag and it was #hashtag vs tag and gap they won their first game and they were all happy thanks to Tana Teo he was the player of the day.

After they had finished their game they all went back to Tana’s grandparents house for their celebration. They had food drinks and they all had a good night later that day Tana’s mum came back around 10:00 clock in the morning Tana wasn't excited to see her ‘why are you here asked Tana”  his mum said i lost my job” he stated bursting out with tears that his mum didn’t have a job anymore Tana told his mum that he just joined tag and got approved to be a perfect Tana’s mum was for but sadly they had to leave kaikohe.

The next day it was time for Tana to leave  kaikohe he was sad to let his friends go and also his grandparents. He was angry because he just got approved to be a prefect and that was his dream and he said to himself that when he get’s back to king’s college there will already be prefects “owell Tana said to himself there is always a chance next year.

How to make plain cookies

WALT: information year 4's can read #
Hi and this is my cookie dough recipe but just with no chocolate chips if you want you can add anything into your cookie dough so this really how to make cookie dough this is for the year 4's to help them guide to where they want to be when they grow up and instructions on what they should do

Partly cloudy

WOW! have you ever heard of cheerful clouds in the sky well I will tell you all about it. Partly clouds are clouds that make cute and cuddly babies,puppies,kittens and many more cute creatures they have storks that deliver their living creatures and babies from the clouds to human caregivers, parents and animals as well. There was a cloud named Sam, Sam was a cloud that would make dangerous living animals they were cute but not so cuddly his deliverer Stanley was getting the worst of it like being bitten by a crocodile,butted by a bighorn sheep,and pricked by a porcupine. When Stanley saw the next delivery being made and saw it was a baby shark he started feel his fear coming on and Stanley flies away when Stanley flew away Sam started to get really upset so he started to burst out with tears with thunder so loud Sam was getting furious so then Stanley got a gift from one of the cheerful and happy clouds and Stanley's gift was head gear to protect him from getting hurt.

Show Not Tell

WALT: Show our audience with our words rather than directly tell.

This is a presentation about show not tell enjoy and leave a comment down below thank you

Cross Country - Effective Paragraph

(Show not tell)

i burst like a simple flame my brain was pounding like a drum my fists were shaking.I was frustrated my leg was burning like a hot tamale i could feel my heart pounding like it was gonna pop out like popcorn. I was a bull who was ready to charge and felt angry and ready to rumble through the wild crowd i could hear the jungle of monkeys and lions cheering and roaring saying you can do it i wanted to go home but once i got to the starting line, i couldn’t because once Mr Burt slammed the bricks together it was game on. I could not wait until i crossed the finish line it was a relief i tried my best to do my best at the cross country race.

Why do our muscles get tired?

P1:Let me start with smooth muscle it also has another meaning for this it’s called the involuntary that means it works even though you're not trying. When a person throws up the smooth muscles in the body are at work the muscles push food out of the stomach up through the esophagus and out the mouth the smooth muscle are found in the walls of the stomach intestine and other halowe aygunes like the bladder the smooth muscle site out of the outer covering and the inner lining the smooth muscle on the side of the stomach helps keeps things moving in the organ strait through your intestine as it’s being digested.

P2: Another muscle that does not work when you're tired is called cardiac muscle and also your heart is very good you might be interested to know that another name for your heart is also called the myocardium it contracts and relaxes to pump blood through your body.

P3: Skeletal muscles are also called Voluntary muscles unlike un voluntary muscles you decide when and how to move them they won’t move until you make them move there attached to your bones and your bytensess so altogether bones and tendons make your body powerful. The voluntary muscles are controlled by the parts of the brain known as the three motor cortex and the cerebellum it works like this. When you decide to move the motor cortex sends an electrical signal through the spinal cord and proves it’s nerves to the muscles and they also contact to send them a sign.

How the Olympics came to be!!

Intro: WOW i can not believe the 2016 Olympics are going to begin in 3 days time prepare to see the 2016 Olympics of your whole entire life.

P1: The ancient Olympics began  2,700 years ago in Olympia,in the south west of Greece 776 bc. Every 4 years over 50,000 people would come watch and compete in the Olympic games but the women weren't allowed they were p: band and the unmarried women were allowed to compete and support in the Olympics but the married women weren't allowed, even though they tried to sneak in they would get caught then they would be thrown off the side of a cliff into a swirl pool, the reason is to sacrifice a living thing to there gods.

P:2 The people of Olympia ancient Greece they lit the torch as a symbol to honour Zeus to their ancient festival. The Founder was a man called pelops - king of Pisa of the Olympics.

P3: Also from 776 bc to 2016 the Olympics games still ignites now of 2016 and the common games in 776 bc in Greece Olympia are running javelin discus and many more.

P4: The ancient Greek Started as a festival to honour Zeus and other Greek Gods they would prepare a ancient special festival to honour the great and wise men Zeus of the gods and a father to Jesus and they also would light a torch to make sure Zeus were to be seen to his people and also his family.  

Conclusion: So sit back relax and watch the 2016 Olympics began.

The mighty Maori warrior

The Maori Warrior and the strong storm

Once upon a time in a far away land there lived a Maori warrior his name was tamati he was a mighty brave warrior he was the guardian of the Maori land. The next day when the Maori legend woke up he could hear the thundering storm heading his way so he knew he had needed to help everybody take cover from the storm the village people were so scared,worried and frustrated so the warrior went and tried to make everybody calm and safe. The storm was getting worse and worse and all they could hear was the thundering noise of the strong and loud storm it was terrifying.

Suddenly tamati the mighty Maori warrior took on the strong storm to help his whanau and friends and to keep them safe and he knew he needed to do something so he spoke to god and the strong storm so the storm and god had stopped the strange and strong storm from hurting tamati's whanau and friends so timati's whanau couldn’t get hurt. So as soon as they stopped the strong storm everything was fine and ok for the Maori village to come out and everyone was safe and sound and they all lived happily ever after.

Fun week for year 7's

On Wednesday the year sevens had a fun week that day was Birthday it was so fun because when school started we got to watch a movie called from boys to men and miss Muliaumasealii was in the movie she looked so young. That day we all were doing art with flower leis they looked so amazing and awesome when we hanged them up on the poles by room 3. Then it came to the end of the day we had a lot of fun.

The next day was Thursday we got to have popcorn to finish the movie from boys 2 men it was so sad to see the year 8’s go. So we did some work about the movie we were watching it was a boy named malaga he was getting hurt from his caregiver so he ran away. Then he meet this boy named johno he said he was gonna take care of malaga so he did any way let’s get back to my writing when we finished watching the movie we all packed up and got ready to go home.

The next day was the last day of term 1 I didn't want it to be the last day because I knew I would miss my best friends but I just had to go with it. I was so happy because I got to be one of the year 8 leaders because one of the leaders weren't here so I got to be one if you're a leader you have to make sure everything is on track and make sure people are not doing the wrong thing.

When it was time the cooking team had our lunch ready for us it was cheese pasta Italian bake it was so delicious.Our dish came with a zero coke but first we had to go for a run around the field it was only one lap around the field and when I got back from the run I was so thirsty and we got to eat I started to drink my coke and the coke made my burp 3 times and all of the year 7’s and 4 of the year 8’s had an awesome time.

 

Immersion Assembly

Wow you will never guess what day it is today the first day of school.

On the 2nd of may Point England school had an Emergency Assembly and teams 1,2,3,4 and 5 had to show what kind of item they were going to do so first up was team 1 they were talking about what favourite things do you like and at the end of their movie Ms George asked some questions about what kind of things the team 1 teachers like to do and if you got them right you would get a chocolate.

The next item was team 2 the were all talking about winter,summer,autumn and spring and my favourite part about their movie was Mrs Dwyers talking about summer going to the beach drinking a glass of lemonade and chilling with your friends and having lot’s of fun.

My favourite Item was the teacher vengers the the teacher were staring as wondering woman,Bat guy and Teacher leader America. They had to save the other superheroes from Bear baxendine and there team name was Amateur heroes so teacher leader said assemble and they started to take on bear baxendine POOF! POW! THWACK! So the super heroes put bear baxendine in jail and it was all over.

The next item was team 5 and they were having a waka race between Te Aurere,Hikianalia,Hinemoana and hokulea they had to sail to the other side of the stage. Hinemoana was coming first but then Hokule'a was catching up. Then Hinemoana was going the wrong way so Hokule’a won the race and there boat got the medal. Hikianalia are the stars that guides us Hinemoana is the guardian of the sea Te Aurere blood sweat and tears and last but not least hokule'a represents the earth and this is the end of my story.